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power-man Member

Joined: 19 Feb 2010 Posts: 418
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:32 pm Post subject: Mo-Do & Basic Element - EuropoweR Demo Remix |
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Greetings friends
well I hope you like it is my first eurodance
comments and criticisms .............??
Mo-Do & Basic Element - EuropoweR Demo Remix
http://www.4shared.com/mp3/-3ClGi12/Mo-Do__Basic_Element_-_Europow.html _________________ POWER-MAN
eurodance best of my life. |
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energy77 Immortal Eurodancer


Joined: 12 Jan 2008 Posts: 5353 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:51 am Post subject: |
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not bad bro, but i;m sure other guys will say that as well, but why u didnt use any synthesizers, would have been much more better (maybe Krasi can help you with that) and the bassline is not strong enough too. Again i'm not expert in remixing as u know, but just my personal opinion. i also like your intro to the song as well  |
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Krasi Immortal Eurodancer


Joined: 13 Jan 2006 Posts: 5236 Location: Sofia, Bulgaria
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:59 am Post subject: |
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Really nice strings at the beginning! The bass sounds nice too, what VST/sample have you used for the bassline? The kickdrum isn't loud enough. The second rap part is out of tune. The techno synths after the rap are completely out of tune, out of harmony, playing in a different tonality. Fix them or just get rid of them. As energy77 said, you should use some synths too. Except the open hihat, use closed hihats too, and also some other percussion (tambourine for example). Use clap samples.
However, this sounds much better than my first track (and the second too)...  |
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monster D. Junior Member

Joined: 24 Dec 2010 Posts: 156 Location: russian
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Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 5:01 am Post subject: Re: Mo-Do & Basic Element - EuropoweR Demo Remix |
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Not bad for the beginning. The main thing to find the style. Good luck. |
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Eurodancer DT Relic


Joined: 13 Jan 2006 Posts: 2317
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Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 7:05 pm Post subject: |
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You got the intro, and bassline down perfect. Nice little basic element part in there. Work on the synties part now  _________________ "eurodance is like a dream in a dream, ignites the fire within my soul" |
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power-man Member

Joined: 19 Feb 2010 Posts: 418
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:30 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for your comments. thought it would not have any
well I hope someone's help to try to improve
[b]some video tutorial? [/b] _________________ POWER-MAN
eurodance best of my life. |
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Krasi Immortal Eurodancer


Joined: 13 Jan 2006 Posts: 5236 Location: Sofia, Bulgaria
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:39 am Post subject: |
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| power-man wrote: |
Thanks for your comments. thought it would not have any
well I hope someone's help to try to improve
[b]some video tutorial? [/b] |
I promise I will find a good video recording software and make some tutorials for you. Or at least I will explain you some things using screenshots.  |
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power-man Member

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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:52 am Post subject: |
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| Krasi wrote: |
| power-man wrote: |
Thanks for your comments. thought it would not have any
well I hope someone's help to try to improve
[b]some video tutorial? [/b] |
I promise I will find a good video recording software and make some tutorials for you. Or at least I will explain you some things using screenshots.  |
That would be great
would be helpful
I'll wait. _________________ POWER-MAN
eurodance best of my life. |
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